Her Majesty, Lake Superior

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    Her Majesty, Lake Superior

    In the sand facing her,
    Feeling the waves all-knowing hello.
    Waiting, watching,
    Yearning for you, wanting you, missing you.

    Breaths do not come easily
    As the grasp of heartache
    Pull them away.
    My bleeding heart pours
    Onto the sands.
    And my tears embrace
    Superiors cry.
    The empty shadows
    lurk within my soul
    And I ache for your touch.
    The vast horizon
    Enhances lonely visions
    And I feel you with me.
    The gulls free flight
    Cannot lift this force from
    my chest that pounds its beats
    into my ears.
    Her superior waters cannot
    soothe the pain this time.
    Only your love, here now
    Would heal this broken heart.

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    stellar commented on Her Majesty, Lake Superior

    09-25-2009

    indeed...in this poem nature can't redeem him...it's love///love this poem....wish u read one of my works too..thanks

    WordSlinger commented on Her Majesty, Lake Superior

    05-14-2009

    Awe, I was taken there by this poem, :) ty (10)

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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