He Painted My Picture

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He Painted My Picture


I set there for hours with my brush in hand,
To paint a picture, like from the beauty of the land.
The colors of my pallet I could not copy,
For their hues I could not compare.
To my master who was like instructing,
Like when I was sitting there.
I tried to capture the landscape with all of its hills and rocks,
But no matter what color I had used I found that I could not.

From the canvas that I had now was no longer bare,
For all that I needed to paint was of me sitting there.
In an instant I had found my picture was complete,
I saw my whole self right down to my feet.
I stood to look at my picture with me sitting there,
I even had the right color to my graying hair.
I had wondered how I had did it and I wanted to excitingly scream.
Until I now realized that it was my reflection in that gentle flowing stream.

I looked back at my canvas,
That was dry and still bare.
And I wondered what I had painted,
Like when I was sitting there.
My pallet still had color,
This was dabbled with lots of mixtures.
For it was not I who was the artist,
It was he who painted my picture.








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Musicmynded1 commented on He Painted My Picture

01-27-2011

Well thought out schemes of words to convey inner, deeper than surface feelings.

Tidewader

02/04/2011

Thank you. my poetry is from within so I feel the words penetrate the heart of it all and the parchment becomes a canvas like words that paint a picture.

bluewolf commented on He Painted My Picture

01-27-2011

Your poem brings to mind this book that I read to my son often, The Legend of the Paintbrush; sent by a wonderful program called Dolly Parton Library. It is the story of a young Native American who does not understand why he is not a warrior. In time, however, he comes to appreciate his artistic gift and when he achieves manhood goes on his spiritual quest. During this journey the Great Spirit tells him to find pure white buckskin and paint the colors of the sunset. No matter how he searches or what paints he uses he is unableto do so. But due to the love of his gift and loyalty he finds the colors eventually. You truly are talented.

Tidewader

01/27/2011

then you would love a story that I wrote for children, it is called Little Sun Two , the buffalo hunter which is a story about a young indian boy on his quest for manhood and spirituality. In search of himself and the coming of his own he finds out who he truely is on an almost to late moment.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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