Haiku #2

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    Thanks to my mentor ApaqRasgirl for making this possible!!! this is my second haiku!!!

    Haiku #2
    1)Cool Droplets of Dew
    2)It Falls Like A Gentle Rain -------7syllables
    3)In this graceful place
    Cool Droplets of Dew
    It Falls Like A Gentle Rain 
    In this graceful place


    By Brittkun and  ApaqRasgirl

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    angelchaser commented on Haiku #2

    12-27-2010

    This one is beautiful:) another great haiku. Hope you write more of them.
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    ApaqRasgirl commented on Haiku #2

    08-27-2010

    wow, this one is supurb, so serene and peaceful i the words. like standing in a secret clearing in the forest that no one else knows about as it is your own special place, just as the sun is rising and the nights dew begins to drip down giving moisture to the plants......wonderful, fantastic Haiku dear.........another 10+++
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    BrittKun

    08/29/2010

    Yeah I kinda have to get that mental picture to really write something like this or experience it Thanks for your time and support Love Britt

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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