Freefall

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    Freefall

    Not sure what I want
    Not sure if I can face it
    Not sure of anything
    Too much distance and pain
    Between me and the world

    Falling with arms wide
    But eyes half-closed
    Don’t want to see it all
    What’s really happening
    Don’t care anymore

    All that matters
    Is that gravity pulls
    I’m falling fast
    No time for analyzing
    Just feel it

    Wind of life rushing by me
    Everything fades
    Into a single moment
    Don’t reach for it
    Don’t hold on
    Just let it come and go
    In peace

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    TamiG76 commented on Freefall

    05-22-2009

    Whoa!!!! Those are some powerful words dude!!!! They really bring the pictures to life and I don't think I like seeing my life fly by me that fast, but I really love the poem.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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