Fragile Heart / In Search

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  • Cry For Love

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    This is one of a series of Fragile Heart poems written over a period of time.

    Fragile Heart / In Search

     Who can save a Fragile Heart?

    One who's souls been torn apart.
    One that doesn't have a dream
    One voice becomes a silent scream
    One overcome by life's grip
    On love and relationship


    Who can save a Fragile Heart?

    One more Cupid arrow to dart
    One problem I just can't solve
    One point in time that won't evolve
    One sense that all is in vain
    One broken heart, Oh such pain


    Who can save a Fragile Heart?

    One precious moment won't you start?
    One searches for this everyday
    One to give, who will stay
    One memory that will last
    One thing to hold on from the past

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    Sx9 commented on Fragile Heart / In Search

    12-16-2009

    that is all u ask,,nice strong,,reto,original,great work,,just is..respect..
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    Chrisjan commented on Fragile Heart / In Search

    07-11-2009

    You have a gift for writting. You words that arise from you soul, travel through your heart, then full expression on paper. This is another excellent poem. Thanks for sharing.
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    roseblooming commented on Fragile Heart / In Search

    07-01-2009

    I like the repetition of "One" on each line that makes this a melody. Nice.
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    Aza

    07/02/2009

    I am the One, that searches. Though I leave it open knowing it could be anyone. Thanks

    MzOmowale commented on Fragile Heart / In Search

    06-29-2009

    Very beautiful and meaningful. Hearts are fragile.
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    Aza

    07/02/2009

    Hello Dear friend, you know I am overflowing. It is my nature. I have connected with many hearts, kind, hard, and a few fragile as mine. Thank you

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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