Why

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    Why

    Oh God, You have blessed me so abundantly
    I am ashamed to ask or want more from thee

        But my heart just dosen't seem to know
           Why I had to let him go

    Please forgive me when I cry
    I just can't explain to myself why

    No one's what they're suppose to be
     I just wanted someone to love me!

    I wonder if I ask to much
    A warn caress, a tender touch

    The joy a child brings to the world
    A precious gift, the perfect pearl

    And the horizon, what a view
    I am you creation, the image of you

    But I am so weak, and so frail
    My song is just another sad tale

    This thing called love I thought I knew
    Shattered my heart, broke my spirit too.

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    Chrisjan commented on Why

    07-21-2019

    Whoa, very descriptive !! The right person is out there for you. A soul mate. I pray you meet soon, to have no more broken hearts. Very well written, indeed !! Honest, never give up. Follow your heart and God in Heaven to guide you. A 10 point for sure.
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    TinaD commented on Why

    12-22-2010

    Nice form...and conveys the emotion very well. Thanks for sharing.
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    ansari commented on Why

    08-11-2010

    It's absolutely deep from your heart. what a marvellous flow of words, emotion and subject. I felt thrilled to read it, so profoundly beautiful and wonderfully expressed. thank you. a plumb 10 from me. ansari
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    kdarcy commented on Why

    08-07-2010

    Heartfelt words known to the creator before they were written and shared. You acknowledge your source of all feelings and emmotions, you shall be rewarded. Other than a couple typos and maybe a few extra words thrown in, it was a nice write, thanks for sharing, be well ... stop by on my writes if you find moment- comments would be nice, maybe I've written something you would enjoy or help you
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    Sx9 commented on Why

    12-16-2009

    it happen,,strong vibes,words and creation,inspiration to the maxx..walk good..this is what poetry do,this is my poem when you read it,that is poetry and inspiration,..
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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