Forgivness

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Forgivness

Forgive the sins of a man off track
Forgive him his evil ways
Forgivness is the only way
Bare unto him your love
Hold him close as you can
His wounds open to the evil ways
Only you can heal his heart
Broken it is from sins long past
Hear his words of terror and anger
His world ripped apart in times long ago
In need of your heart to heal him so
Take what you may from my own memories
Hear me and listen to my own humble plea

 

 

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poptart commented on Forgivness

07-04-2010

this iss a good 1 to you need to get these published soon ppl would love them trust me

dumplin commented on Forgivness

09-17-2009

I don't know what to say. I haven't the power to grant your wishes, but I certainly wish the best for you, my troubled friend. Good work. You are very artistic, but you need to hone in on it more and tweak it a little.

1990lh commented on Forgivness

09-14-2009

nice write enjoyed reading it well done....keep it up

bobarobbob commented on Forgivness

09-14-2009

Interesting sentiment. Not entirely sure that man isn't beyond redemption, though. Well written.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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