Entrapment

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Entrapment

Fortitude holds my empty soul

Ravaging from me the light within

Holding me there hopelessly entranced

Enchanted by its beauty

Paralyzing my will to move

Breathlessly waiting for release

Petrifaction overtaking my senses

Wars raging between fight and flight

Helpless pray I am to your will

Repression bonding me in place

I am yours to do your bidding

I pray to be unharmed

And powerless against you

I bend to you as you will me to

Your magnetism too strongly fascinates

No hope for flee or escape

My imprisoned soul is yours forever

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hdmac commented on Entrapment

09-02-2009

Very good imagery. I could see your poem coming alive.

Bogdania commented on Entrapment

06-02-2009

nice verse miss kitty. provides real sense of desperation at being the rope in a nonstop all day tug-of-war. tres interesant

kittyzeddmore

06/03/2009

Thankyou, thus it explains the story of my life, as it seems to be always an uphill battle.

wildpendigus commented on Entrapment

06-02-2009

I really like this poem. it's really nice. have you ever thought of being a lyric songwriter? well I was for a awhile, the royalties are rather nice I still dabble in producing and writing some songs I think you have the talent also grecowong@yahoo.com

kittyzeddmore

06/03/2009

Thankyou. I am very new at this as I've only been writing this way for the past couple of months, but maybe someday my poems will strike interest with the right people and I will do just that.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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