Children of Destiny

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    Our very futures rely in the offspring of our youth, it is not to be taken for granted for it is what makes us who we are.

    Children of Destiny

    Glancing through time continues

    Fleeting faces seen unheard

    Children of destiny born among us

    Fulfilling their goals

    Saving our wretched world from its own demise

    Wars fought and battles raged

    Lives lost and souls saved

    After the fire rages and consumes

    New life sprouts greener, fuller

    The children of destiny are the roots of new growth

    Times of change are upon us

    It nears so you can almost taste its glory

    Will it be a blessing or a curse?

    Will it be a beginning or an end?

    Only time can tell what lies ahead and fate holds

    For the children of destiny

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    BestMonkey commented on Children of Destiny

    06-04-2009

    I was left wondering what the children of destiny are. I think that was done well. The suspense worked for it. Also, after skimming your bio, I was wondering if it's about your kids?
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    kittyzeddmore

    06/04/2009

    It's about all our children, our future. What we instil in them is the most important thing, because it is they who live on and carry on our own stories, not us.

    MESIAS777 commented on Children of Destiny

    06-03-2009

    A well took over a town like a child takes over smile listen to the child you will hear the future lisetn very carefull you might hear wahts next
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    Cosmos commented on Children of Destiny

    06-03-2009

    I am humbled again. I like this one even more than your last one. Very powerful meaning and the imagery is used well.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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