Elissas fairytale

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    Elissas fairytale

    Sitting there I see the bride dressed in white
    and i see the groom smiling in the light
    and I feel the magic in the  room, the love is right
    the feelings continue as we dance all night.

    I see this nice couple now 10 years later
    still happy and celebrating their anniversaries.
    smiling still, and raising a happy a family. Staying
    Strong through the tears and many years.

    secretly knowing that the vows they made
     they have kept true, and no other person
    would ever do. Helping others and giving
    selflessly has made there life happy.

     Now I see them now old and getting grey
    still together acting as young as their wedding day
    dancing and smiling the whole night through as
    happiness filled us with smiles and love.

     they have a lifetime of memories a beautiful
    story, a treasure unseen the gift of love
    has kept them together until their last breath
    our hearts are full of tears as they say goodbye.

     

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    elissa13 commented on Elissas fairytale

    09-01-2009

    okay im commenting again lol... i randomly come back and read this poem i just absolutly love it like i dont know its just awesome ha

    elissa13 commented on Elissas fairytale

    08-12-2009

    oh my gosh its up! i havent checked this in a while ha i was surprised when i saw it up! i love it its so beautiful thatnk you so much!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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