Dragena's Fire

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This is a pro-log to my newest book that is at my publisher now in
pre-production let me know what you think and if there is interest in reading more.

Dragena's Fire

Dragena's Fire

Was told in times of old

of a Dragon Mare who reared

a human child.

 

About a Queen

that disappeared and a King that was under

a seductress spell.

 

Some would even tell of hearing the

Queen’s lonely song whispering on the wind

from the dungeon below the Castle.

 

It is also told that a handsome Knight

fell in love with the Dragon Girl.

Together the set out to find the Queen.

 

Then Dragon's and Humans come together to

unite a kingdom.

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MAFLongfellow commented on Dragena's Fire

09-18-2009

YOU GOT ME HOOKED ALREADY AND I DON'T USUALLY READ FICTION. I'LL STAY TUNED FOR THE REST. GREAT WRITE:)MARILYN

justastar2

09/18/2009

This poem turned into a book and it is at my publishers now. Thanks for the review and comments.

Hampton commented on Dragena's Fire

09-07-2009

An interesting introduction to your work Imaginative and inticing.

justastar2

09/07/2009

Thank you for your review and comment.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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