Discarded Love

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  • Lost Love

    Discarded Love
    Bleak midwinter

    And snow lies all around

    My heart is cold and empty

    And I long to walk on the hot sand

    With the sun burning my body

    And my love close at hand

    Will you ever return?

    Or will I always live in bleak midwinter

    Send me word of where you are

    Have you found a new love?

    Have you moved on to someone new?

    I am still in a frozen state

    Stuck rigid where you left me

    Unable to move on

    One kiss would thaw my bones

    One moment of bliss would unfreeze my toes

    I would follow you to the ends of the earth

    But my feet are frozen to the ground

    And all around there is no sound

    In this frozen wilderness

    I will live forever

    Suspended in time

    A monument to discarded love

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    baby19 commented on Discarded Love

    03-10-2009

    just makes me think of how the someone sees love.
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    poeticmayhem commented on Discarded Love

    03-09-2009

    Nice Work!
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