CONTROL FREAK

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JUST ALOT OF ANGER I HAD FOR SOMEONE WHO HAD HIDDEN AGENDAS THAT I DID NOT SEE, SINGLE MOM WITH 3 KIDS I WAS VERY ANGRY BECAUSE WHAT AFFECTS ME AFFECTS THEM, AND THAT I WILL NOT TOLERATE.I

CONTROL FREAK

HELLO CONTROL FREAK, I THINK YOU SPRUNG A LEAK,AND
YOUR WORDS ARE QUITE TWEAKED,
 KNOW YOU THINK YOU OWN ME,BUT REALLY ALL YOU SHOWN ME,IS FEAR
OF YOURSELF,SO YOU PUT ME ON YOUR SELF PITY
SHELF
,YOUR SELF RITCHOUS WAYS,YOU ARE SO REALISTICTLY
DELAYED,
BUT WE WONT GO THERE,YOU MIGHT FEEL BETRAYED
WHY DO I HAVE TO BE SUBJECTED TO THIS INSECURE TRIP,GET A  FRIGGEN GRIP
,YOUR SO UNREASONABLE, AND IT'S UNIVERSALLY AGREEABLE!
 LAST TIME I CHECKED I HAD SELF RESPECT,MY SELF ESTEEM WILL BE REDEEMED,SO QUIT TRYING TO MANIPULATE ME,
IM SO DONE WITH THIS, THE BAD OUT WIEGHS THE GOOD DONT KNOW HOW I MISUNDERSTOOD,ITS NOT BECAUSE OF YOUR BRILLIANCE, IT'S JUST YOUR EVIL RESILLIENCE!

WELL MY SHALLOW FRIEND ALL DARKNESS COME TO A END,THANKS FOR THE LIFE LESSON, YOU MAY HAVE SOME DEPRESSION, AND FEEL TOTAL DESPAIR,SO NEXT TIME YOUR SCARED, BUYERS BEWARE, YOU CANT PUT PEOPLE IN YOUR INSECURE LAYER.ITS JUST NOT FAIR!
 TIME TO BE A MAN NOW, DITCH YOUR BABY HIGH CHAIR
,HELLO YOUR A GROWN UP, THAT HAS RUN OUT OF LUCK, ALWAYS TRYING TO PASS THE LOSER BUCK
,BUT SINCE I HAVE A GOOD HEART, I WILL HELP YOU MAKE FRESH START
,WHAT YOU HAVE EXPECTED IS NOT FAIR TO  ME OR ANYONE IN MY SURROUNDINGS,
 AND OF COURSE I WILL PUT THEM FIRST,BUT I DID LEARN SOMETHING FROM CHURCH

 INGREDIENTS FOR A GOOD LIFE:GOOD THING FOR YOU ITS FREE

,INTEGRITY,INDEPENDENCE,TRUST,FAITHFULNESS,HUMILITY,COMPASSION,
PATIENCE, RESPECT,GRATEFULNESS, GIVING,TRUST IN GOD,NO SUPERFICIAL
ADDETIVES, THIS IS ACTUALLY GOOD TO HAVE PRESERVATIVES/
 
UNFIT LIKE YOU, YOU MUST DEVOUR,AND SO YOU KNOW YOU HAVE NO POWER,
I'LL BE OK, BECAUSE I'M NOT MANMADE IM FROM GOD, AND I'LL MOVE ON,

THIS IS A CARE I DONT HAVE TO BARE,I'M QUIETLY STEPPING ASIDE,IVE GOT MY PRIDE,SINCE THIS IS YOUR STAGE, I WONT PLAY THE FOOL ,THAT IS A ROLE MORE SUITED FOR YOU!

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Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

ABYSS’s Poems (6)

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YOU THINK SO SON! 4
CONTROL FREAK 0
POEMED TO DEATH 1
A FEW GOOD MEN 0
TAPS 5
IN OUR CHILDRENS EYES 3