checking on things

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    checking on things

     Just writing a line
    one or two.
    I should not say
    but I will tell you.
    I wrote more poems
    they went away
    Iam just checking
    will this one will stay?

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    EinStud commented on checking on things

    10-26-2009

    Yes. This one will stay until God decides it time. Read my Poem, Passing the Torch or "The Torch". It was written for the guy who is retiring, who did not make it to the top. It was written for the guy who is wondering what it all is for. It is for the guy who is giving up. I'm never that guy, but it shows that our time is worth something if we share our experiences to make someone else better. Love, Peace...
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