her voice in the wind

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    I have been blessed to have experience a love, that is not bound. Having the awareness to understand and recognize a rare phenomenon. Where love shows it can not be bound, for it is not subject to the laws of science, nor can it be measured. When someone you love, calls out your name, being happy or sad and you hear your name in the wind, then you are truly loved.

    her voice in the wind

    a day, much like today
    her voice in the wind

    a presence, through absent
    her voice in the wind 

    insanity lost, for logic won
    her voice in  the wind

    yet another, much like today
    her voice in the wind

    love hears, as distance transcends
    her voice in the wind

    known voices, a gift not shared
    her voice in the wind 

    science be bound, love knows such
    her voice in the wind





     

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    StandingBear commented on her voice in the wind

    03-21-2010

    An absolutely beautiful work with accompanying commentary. Very well written .. the wind transcends her voice carrying this great message of love only you can hear .. misunderstood by science. A bit similar to Hendrix's song "the Wind Cries Mary".

    alb29oclfl

    03/21/2010

    ty

    SavVySam commented on her voice in the wind

    03-17-2010

    When someones spirit/essence becomes so much a part of you, that you hear "her voice in the wind" love resides deep within...Lovely!

    Teardrops commented on her voice in the wind

    03-15-2010

    I hear my love voice often and when the wind is just right i can feel him touch my face wonderful poem my friend Marie

    Bettysrainbow48 commented on her voice in the wind

    03-14-2010

    This is a very pretty poem. It is almost as if you are saying you can still hear her lovely voice in the echos of the wind. Good write

    icu2 commented on her voice in the wind

    03-13-2010

    Beautiful...and hauntingly mournful..............................TEN.

    alb29oclfl

    03/13/2010

    ty I was unsure how this would be interpreted.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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