bytes of her

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  • Lost Love

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    While at the Mall, I heard a women calling out a name, and I began to recall the first women I thought I was in love with. And like this photo, so many bytes of data, but not a single clear image of her. Why can't I remember her face.

    bytes of her


    the day we met
    moving you upstairs

    walks on the beach
    frolicking in the waves

    weekends at the beach house
    skinny dipping and moonlight

    cuddling on the coach
    entwine in sheets

    plays in the Grove
    bottles of wine

    dancing all night
    breakfast's and boardwalks

    romantic dinners
    and so much laughter

    color of your car
    even your job 

    still see the tears
    and feeling empty

    so many bytes
    not of her face

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    jyothi commented on bytes of her

    04-19-2010

    A imaginary description of words are ---------------------------perfect.

    alb29oclfl

    04/19/2010

    ty

    Teardrops commented on bytes of her

    04-14-2010

    You put such a feeling in my heart of a lonely lost love and i feel each and evey word its a ten all way round Marie

    SavVySam commented on bytes of her

    04-14-2010

    Surely a kindness sometimes, one of the few that Time affords us. Nice write.

    alb29oclfl

    04/14/2010

    ty

    soulwriter commented on bytes of her

    04-13-2010

    I admire the breaks in this, allowing a mind pause to take in the feeling which moves from piece of this to a byte of that... and it all comes together as you part. 10!

    alb29oclfl

    04/13/2010

    ty

    Dano commented on bytes of her

    04-13-2010

    its interesting how we can have memories of people that have crossed out paths but cant remember the most simple details... nicely written

    alb29oclfl

    04/13/2010

    ty

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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