Bloody mess

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A little something I wrote for my mother's current boyfriend. He is an extreme bastard. I know "And fingers on the remote" seems kinda weird, but everything in this is symbolic.

Bloody mess



I can't help but wonder
Why pictures continue to stir
Of this man I hate
And his bloody fate.

I see him lying on the floor
His hand still on the knob of a door
He must have put up some kind of fight
For all of his sight
Is now lying on the floor of moonlight
His legs are on the couch
Arms in the fridge, a form of a louch
And fingers on the remote
Finally, body in a large tote

I glance at myself in a mirror
And to my own terror
I am covered in blood
The chainsaws blade I held was now a dud
I still can't help but wonder
Who made this huge blunder

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Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

misamisa602150’s Poems (18)

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Love-hate murder 0
Broken heart sadness 0
The saddest day 0
Murder 0
Lovestruck 0
Bloody mess 0
Tears 0
Not what I need 1
Vampire 1
The endless cycle 1
Dying 0
Forget 0
Untitled 0
You did it 1
You are my nightmare 1
Still 2
Immortilized 1
You can't rape the willing 3