Angel's Have No Fear
An angel of the night...wakes with the dawn of a new light..she brushes the hair from her eyes...and the angel tries not to cry....she tries to be bright...for those who crave her light..she hides behind the effects of the day..hoping they will go away...she knows that make-up cant hide the lines...and the thoughts that curse through her mind...the bile that promies to arise...there will be no time for disguise...the needle that will pierce her skin...she prays for a cure thats what she hopes to win...the anguish fills up her heart...there is no time to depart...for this task she must partake....and live a life that is not fake....she closes her eyes and takes a deep breath...and wonder what comes after death...wishing these days would hurry and pass...like the sands of time in an hour glass...she did it all with the best of intentions...but knows somethings lack entervention...a single sigh escapes her lips...the glass of water she will sip...i wish you all better days...lord please take these pains away..Angel's Have No Fear
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- SexzAngel
- Poetry is like living through wave after wave of words filled with emotions
Poem Commentary
Please dont read more into what is not there. I was taking chemo when i wrote this. Some times chemicals really mess with your head. Hugz
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knight4696 commented on Angel's Have No Fear
01-19-2010
- Sexz - A very powerful and emotional plea ... I hope the pains have diminished ... My prayers are with you. Ken
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tsgirl commented on Angel's Have No Fear
08-25-2009
- wow nice poem, knowing that your writing is good like this should be enough to take your pains away. 1luv
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10/10/2009
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Gracey commented on Angel's Have No Fear
07-15-2009
- this is really good. I felt the poem get stronger as I read more. I was hooked.
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08/01/2009
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WordSlinger commented on Angel's Have No Fear
06-26-2009
- The first two lines ring in my poetic mind, then the next for just make me want to becomean arist, my animator, wow, what a poem.
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06/27/2009
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dahlusion commented on Angel's Have No Fear
06-23-2009
- Being that I have an entire manuscript on angel poems, I am drawn to this concept. Though a dark, beautifully dark poem, I am taken by the creative power of your words. The flow is smooth; the rhythm is perfect; the imagery is seductive in a poetic way.
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06/25/2009
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