A Plead for Completion

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  • SexzAngel
  • Poetry is like living through wave after wave of words filled with emotions

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Just me missing my Cowboy and wanting him to come home to me.

A Plead for Completion

Come lay your cheek next to mine,
And hold my hand through the passing of time.
Come place your lips upon mine so warm,
And calm my fears through this raging storm.
Here i lay in my bed of sand.
Hoping you will reach and grasp my hand.
I long for your love that shines so bright.
Will you guide me to my prize this night?
In the presence of this darkness.
I search in earnest for your flame.
In the sounds of all this silence.
I softly whisper your name.
My heart is so heavy.
In this place i call my own.
I think of all the love you gave me.
And i crave the tenderness that you had shown.
My love you were my sunshine.
During those dark and dreary days.
Your love is the fragments in the shadows.
That helped to light my way.
I love you so that it is such.
I trembled in your wake.
To feel the tenderness of your touch.
And your passions that make me shake.
Do you hear those soft hushed sounds?.
Thats the beating of my heart.
The emptiness i feel when your not around.
And the echos when were apart.
Will you take my hand and guide me,
On this journey that is so unique?
Our paths are sharp and winding.
Will this voyage make us complete?.

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Altair commented on A Plead for Completion

09-05-2010

Such a wonderful poem, im surprised I havent found you before, you are a breath of fresh air in this...loved it

dahlusion commented on A Plead for Completion

07-26-2010

This is a poetic pearl, a gem, of a love poem. Bravo!! Peace and Light, Dah

knight4696 commented on A Plead for Completion

02-06-2010

Sexz! A very strong emotional write. One can feel the longing and the desire you emote in this wonderful piece! Great Job! :) Ken

lonewolf commented on A Plead for Completion

02-03-2010

nice poem. very good flow. emotion level was high. very nicely written

SexzAngel

02/03/2010

Thank you very much Wolfie

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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