Angel from Beyond

4 Comments

Angel from Beyond

Carrying the burden of life,
And wishing for a better way.
An angel rides on through the night,
Looking for the day.

His brown eyes forever searching,
His dark curls flowing in the wind.
Never sure of what he's looking for,
And never knowing where to begin.

Weary of his endless travels,
He begins to lose hope.
When a kind young maiden takes him in,
Dressing him in the most comfortable of robes.

Why was this woman so kind,
As to dress a stranger in the best?
When she could have used the time,
To make herself a new dress.

Wearing close to rags,
She gives away silk threads.
Sleeping on the floor,
She gives the travler her bed.

This woman he decides,
Gives herself the lower end of life.
This must be why,
God had sent him on the search.
To find this maiden, with a heart so pure.

But years of wandering,
Have left him to decide.
He dosen't want to return so soon.
With this woman he will retire,
Teaching her there is more to life.
And in return she teaches him,
It's better to think of others needs ahead of your own.

Poem Comments

(4)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

MOMofTWINS commented on Angel from Beyond

07-15-2009

Very beautifully written and also wonderfully crafted! A wonderful write. Keep up the great work, hon!

SmileyAngel138 commented on Angel from Beyond

07-15-2009

another beautiful poem, it shows that there is till beauty in the world...i love the way you tell a story, another great one :-)

AshRenee commented on Angel from Beyond

07-15-2009

Aww, this is sweet. It's wonderful, and I love that they both end up needing each other, and finding a purpose

Andy94 commented on Angel from Beyond

07-15-2009

thats really good :) hi im new just wanted 2 read ur poems

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

Bria17’s Poems (9)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Sound off 0
How it is 0
He is gone... 0
Uncertainty 0
Lost in the void 0
Who is he? 1
What passion remains 2
Angel from Beyond 4
She of darkness and light 1