abyss

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    abyss

    im stuck in this abyss,
    my vision thrown askew,
    your ignorence is bliss,
    to not see me notice you,

    you've caught my eye,
    on more than one occasion,
    even if you dont try,
    you've got total heart invasion,

    how to prove myself,
    im not sure of,
    i would give my health,
    just for your love,

    i wear my heart on my sleeve,
    so you might notice me,
    with little hope i believe,
    what could come to be,

    i lay awake at all hours,
    driving me quite insane,
    taking blood soaked showers,
    derailing my crazy train,

    i stare into your eyes,
    for hours i could gaze,
    who knows what lies,
    in this love stained maze,

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    ladyleadfoot commented on abyss

    08-11-2009

    I like it! Much passion, much care. Unrequieted always leaves this kind of feel. I think you handled it well. Keep searching your soul for words that work together.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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