a little like you

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    a little like you

    i look a little like you
    i talk a little like you
    you would think i was your little twin
    someone made from a mold of you
    all your strengths, few of your weaknesses
    every hope and dream
    at one point you loved me
    kept me so dear to your heart
    would never let anyone hurt me
    you might have even died for me at one point
    no anymore, im nothing like you
    all my thoughts my feelings
    im no where as bad as you are
    your are selfish, heartless, mean... you bastard
    im not like you ill never be like you
    accept it and move on.

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    nicoleat19 commented on a little like you

    02-20-2009

    I like the emotion. Great Job of not holding back

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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