A Dance

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  • Love
    • Celestial
    • is too busy with all the unscertainties of life

    A Dance

    life feels as though its drifting away, your thoughts become scattered
    you forget everything you once knew as if it never even mattered

    your emotion is blurred, you dont know if its happiness or fear
    but as the sound fades away, everything begins to become clear

    your vision, unclouded, and your mind breaks from the trance
    feeling yourself slip back into reality, you ask her for one more dance

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    Lind commented on A Dance

    08-08-2017

    It has a hauntingly longing tone in it. Well written, Celestial.

    Pocahantas commented on A Dance

    05-08-2009

    This is very beautiful, I like it. Good write!

    aggieprof commented on A Dance

    03-01-2009

    I like the surprise ending.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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