1Break-up-2-3Make-up

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  • GypsyWoman
  • is at home with a cold! thinking of writing something...searching for inspiration...

1Break-up-2-3Make-up

You take me away to where devils dance shadows
Stare endlessly at dried-out rose petals in a heap of misery
Where players play
In this game death is the only destiny to meet
An incomplete parallel
Innocence tainted and restrained in a whirlwind called a carousel
The cycle keeps repeating the same daze as if in a daydream
Life's enchanted music box is the world around me
Its weeping melody the soft sound that lures me to sleep
Somber and unevaded
As noticed as the extinct
I feel cheated

You take me away to where exstacy consumes me
A heart engulfed in flames in a barren room
Suffocating with its licks and smokey whispers of untold secrets
It keeps me reaching higher to climax in thick air
Collapse in the ashes tired
Energy-impaired
The screams a faint echo like remembering your dreams
Still half asleep continue smoldering
Unconsciously holding me in a vice
One twist my release flows teardrops of rain from the sky
Linger at no cost
There remains a muddy puddle soon to be washed
I feel exhausted

You take me away to where spirituality soothes me
Angels in multi-colors illuminate my space
A kaleidoscope of remedies and loves
Reflect, respect and embrace the hopes and wishes of what my body misses
Your aura put two halves together to make a whole
The ember alone eternally lighting my soul
Incense and herbal cures taunt child's play
Flooding through elementary doors of purity
Paving way with bright streams of happiness
Night comes shining through like ultra-violet rays
Peace and security extending past the frames
The big picture
This is what is called life
I feel revived~



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SILKYTWEED commented on 1Break-up-2-3Make-up

09-22-2009

Spectacular Write...WOW....with an incredibly tight flow!!

Quail1957 commented on 1Break-up-2-3Make-up

02-12-2009

Awesome and very deep;I could truely feel you.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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