03-08-09

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    03-08-09
    I thought I found a friend again
    Still alone here in the end
    Another person come and gone
    Can't figure out what is wrong
    Why they run so far, so fast
    I can't make anything last
    They say they're true
    They'll stand by you
    Then I'll turn around
    And they run away, too
    Am I that bad or strayed away
    People don't know what to say
    I speak my mind and tell the truth
    Don't ask me what I think of you
    I try to help and be your friend
    Wheres it get me in the end?
    Left behind yet again

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    EyesOfRain commented on 03-08-09

    08-29-2012

    This real, concise, and powerful. A very enjoyable piece.
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    HarverTomsson commented on 03-08-09

    08-08-2009

    Intriguing shape of a vase, this one. Such ephemoral distraction. Leave the artifice alone, good words need no addititives.
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    DeeVoelkel commented on 03-08-09

    07-29-2009

    Wow....Story of my life? Yea!! Excellent lines!!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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