"The One"

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    "The One"
    I started a page with something in mind, Not real sure of what I would find, Hope for the best expect the worst, Don't you feel like sometimes you're cursed?, Pulling you this way pushing you down, I'm always trying to get off the ground, When out of the darkness there comes a light, Wanting to see but being too bright, You shine like a beacon to me in the rain, Uplifting words consoling my pain, You helped me to stand I thought I was done, Now I'm left wondering if you are "The One"

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    EyesOfRain commented on "The One"

    08-29-2012

    Nice wording and flow. Another enjoyable read. "You shine like a beacon to me in the rain"
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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