Your Heart

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    I wrote this about a man that took some darkness away from my world......He is illuminating another's heart now, but, the impression stays with me, and will forever.

    Your Heart

    Your Heart

     

    The fog lay heavy in the air,

    Even the most familiar things

    Were invisible.

    Fear and apprehension loomed

    Like clouds blocking all the light.

    Darkness had come

    As an unwelcome visitor

    Refusing to leave.

    Hollow noises made their way

    To the depths of my soul,

    Obstructing all who tried to reach me.

    The search began without hope.

    Looking in all corners for the light,

    Clutching at false promises to find it.

    A glimmer came,

    It was unfamiliar,

    Nothing I had ever seen,

    But somehow knew it was a worthy visitor.

    One that I could hear, feel, even touch.

    No boldness surrounded it,

    Yet it commanded attention.

    It had to make itself known to me.

    I was afraid, but the warmth

    Drew me in.

    As I embraced this light,

    The fog seemed to lift,

    The clouds were not as imposing.

    I tried to turn from it,

    But it held me.

    I could sense its truth,

    The calm air it breathed into my soul,

    Pushing back the noises

    So they were no longer heard.

    The glimmer became a ray,

    Illuminating my senses,

    Igniting hope within me

    Allowing a freedom to move closer,

    And then a vision appeared.

    It was a heart

    Full of strength and peace,

    It was your heart

    Reaching out

    To meet

    Mine.

     

     

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    forbiddenlove commented on Your Heart

    07-02-2013

    One word.....BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! I love this & definitely can relate. Wonderful write:-)

    windsongs commented on Your Heart

    06-21-2013

    my maria;)

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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