Your Eyes

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Your Eyes

 

When I look into your eyes I see

An ocean of excitement and surprise

Changed suddenly in the night of life,

Expectations sometimes Twinkling like stars!

They spread the flames of bright burning of truth!

When I look into your eyes, I feel

It is giving the world the light of true love

While forgiving to the wrongs for others forever.

Sometimes the eyes I feel as waiting for the spring,

Waiting for the bird’s music to ears and tears

Expecting with the golden dawn!

Dear, when I look into your eyes

I am not confused because I know,

Your eyes are amazing books

Having pages in diferent texts and colours,

Telling the experiences silent with tragedies,

Full of aversions overflowing with despisals,

Confusions and pains made into bundles with care!

I can read it wherever you are,

So let me announce: The Sun rise in near

For making your eyes bright and clear!

Dear friend, I can read everything in your eyes,

For they are not yours too, mine as well!

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BikemanRJ commented on Your Eyes

03-29-2010

You can tell a lot about looking into a persons eyes. As they say the eyes are the windows of the soul. You have expressed doing just that in your poem by the words that you have chosen. Good Poem God Bless BikemanRJ

ayyan commented on Your Eyes

03-02-2010

The poem has correctly said that eye is the best indicator that give the correct events and eyes are expressing truth. I like this poem very much of its good writing. ayyan

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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The Property 11
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Your Eyes 2
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Farewell with a smile 2