Let Me Alone

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    Let Me Alone

    Don’t come this way to cry in pains

    Don’t wound your life by harmful tours.

    Pray never to get a chance to be my guest,

    Go before my tears fall down in your heart!

    Don’t allow to burn your hopes and dreams,

    Keep your life cutting short your desires.

    Don’t step down to my yard in the eves

    Give up your wishes to relax with dears.

    The path into my life is rough and harsh,

    My heart is heavy with sorrows and shocks.

    Keep away, or you may burn in my breaths,

    Never become a tale in the stream of bleeps.

    Let me alone in the darkness till the end!

    Depart from me to become fresh and glad!

    Don’t, don’t worry that again I will cry,

    For no drop of tears in my eyes, it is dry!

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    BikemanRJ commented on Let Me Alone

    03-29-2010

    "Keep your life cutting short your desires" wow that line caught my eyes Such a true statement if a person is not willing to give up their life and make sacrifices for others then why should they have what they desire. This is a very sad poem I feel your pain. And I hear your voice loud and clear telling this person to leave you alone and give you some space. It is very obvious that you have had all you can take. Hope you have worked thru this tough time in your life. God Bless BikemanRJ Gave you a 10 your grammar and word flow on the poem was great.
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    Vineeth commented on Let Me Alone

    03-27-2010

    "Don’t, don’t worry that again I will cry,For no drop of tears in my eyes, it is dry!"...these lines bringout the deepness of sorrows....nice one
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    Bladleyking commented on Let Me Alone

    03-26-2010

    Lonliness make me always sad..i like this poem and experiened as my own....thx
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    Florence commented on Let Me Alone

    03-26-2010

    Let me alone....asimple writing with strong ideas and words of usage
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    ayyan commented on Let Me Alone

    03-25-2010

    "For no drop of tears in my eyes, it is dry!" I have gone through the poem fully. You have give the lines fully your powerful workings in mind. I Ike this line. a'yan
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