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    You

    My mind is goin crazy.
    My thoughts are hazy.
    Thinking of you makes me wonder.
    But all i hear is thunder.
    Your name running through my head all day.
    My heart is saying no way.
    Time passing us by no matter how hard we try.
    I want you in my life.
    The thought seems so far away.
    I try so hard to make it happen.
    But at the same time i fel like snappin.
    The pain that i feel when you say my name and then i awake.
    Just to realize that its all a day dream.

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    Drivingczar commented on You

    03-18-2009

    Your words make a fantasy seem real!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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