look at it

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    look at it
    dreams a lost young petal. wondering souls. i see the dream you seek. follow me please, if you dare.the dream is coming. for u and me. i return by your side with a heart in my hand. it its like a bright fire dancing. to the slow music turning. my heart as smooth as ivory. has turned to lonely sulfur.i retire my heart to you. love me because i love you.

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    CdeM commented on look at it

    02-26-2009

    Beautiful, both in sentiment and syllable...
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    clown commented on look at it

    02-11-2009

    very nice
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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