Women

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    Women

    I want to know, what are you thinking of

    I did not think you wanted to play a game

    Last night I had a hurt feeling, called love

    I lost my mind over you, I went insane

     

    You have taken me into a brand new world

    I need you to talk to me, and hold my hand

    I think I love you, you are my nasty girl

    I want to talk to you, as much as I can

     

    I thought I would never be thinking like this

    I love my world, my kids, and my wife

    but I go craxy, at the thought of your kiss

    you are in my thoughts, my mind, and my life

     

    I find it strange how life moves along

    day in, day out, same rut, everything is fine

    you meet someone new, your heart sings a song

    and all of a sudden you fall without a safety line

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    Sx9 commented on Women

    07-29-2010

    yes brother that is the move,no ne there to catch u when ur out and nee that somthin,walk good,,nice vibes,,
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    BlacknWhite commented on Women

    07-01-2009

    I like that. I can relate. But, thing is it is a lose/lose situation. An apocolypse waiting to happen! I divorced my husband and married my affair, now Im divorced again. And we never cheated on each other. Set the odds against us. Nice work.
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    evie01 commented on Women

    07-01-2009

    it was moving , it spook to me . it reminds me of the way i once felt for someone ,so in love but at the same time confused because because i loved my family also
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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