Without Your Love..

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  • Jealousy

    Without Your Love..

    When we were together
    I knew you truly cared for me
    Until the day i moved away
    we would always be.
    You always said that we would never grow apart
    All i did was cry each day
    You would break my heart.
    Every time i looked at you
    I would fall apart
    Cant you see i'm breaking' down without your love?
    When you said you hated me i died inside.
    You just don't understand the way i feel.
    It's like all my emotions bursting' in to flames
    I fear!
    How you could do this to me
    I'd never know
    All i know is that i have faded AWAY!

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    wagus commented on Without Your Love..

    07-21-2009

    Nice easy read feel the pain in words.. Notice that only to start lines did ya cap the I otherwise it was low case i... To me visual of how you felt as wrote it 'small' (i) then "real pain" (I).

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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