Lovin' Lies

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    Lovin' Lies

    Your lovin lies, it's most of you guys
    You say you love us girls just to get our
    precious pearls and when we dont give it up
    It's like you move on to another, but the only
    thing that we girls need is our dignity and we
    still have our most precious thing.
    Your lovin' lies...I have seen in my eyes
    and I have fallen so deep and believed every
    word you have said to me, feeling like
    a complete fool.
    Your lovin' lies are my last GOODBYE'S

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    BLASTHEME commented on Lovin' Lies

    05-29-2009

    this is a deep topic right here, an the fact that you tackled it, whether from personal experience or from indirect, it's a hurting thing. Women are the most precious commodity that we(men) are swiftly losing, due to a number of factors. It's a shame regardless of what the reason is, as it all contains PAIN. GREAT WORK!! 10+ come by an peep some of my work too Peace BLAS

    joehomie31 commented on Lovin' Lies

    05-18-2009

    Good but why u gotta be dissin us guys? lol

    JonTalbain commented on Lovin' Lies

    05-01-2009

    you go girl!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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    Someday... 2
    Lovin' Lies 3
    Betrayal! 0
    HOW? 1
    When I think 1
    Without Your Love.. 1
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