Within

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    • Bones73
    • just added 2 writings...let me know what you think

    Within

    I see your tired eyes drowning in sorrow
    I see the hole in your hands that let go of your dreams
    I hear your thoughts oh how they shake and rattle
    All you want to do is lie in peace

    Your skin is under their nails and you're bleeding
    They have their foot on the back of your neck and you're sinking
    Your blistered lips mumble words no one is hearing
    All you want to do is lie in peace

    Oh how long must you be enslaved by the enemy?
    All you want to do is lie in peace

    The grains of sand are ticking so slowly
    You wonder if tomorrow will bring you your sleep
    I take another look at you so slowly and realize that the mirror is staring at me

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    FindingJune commented on Within

    10-22-2009

    Good God man....you had me at the holes in your hands. I very much relate to this on a deep personal level. Our perspectives may not be the same, but I am moved nonetheless. Well done.

    Bones73

    11/02/2009

    Thank you..I am really glad you enjoyed it

    photochick commented on Within

    08-20-2009

    your talent shines within your words of beauty nice flow and fantastic imagery you paint a wonderful canvas for your readers with your choice of words perfectly placed in this poem looking forward to reading more of your work fantastic detail thanks for sharing

    Bones73

    08/22/2009

    Thank you I do need to put some more writings up

    lanice224 commented on Within

    05-12-2009

    This is amazing. I love the descriptions and how they flow. Very well written.

    Bones73

    08/22/2009

    Thank you very much

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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