TRAPPED

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    • Bones73
    • just added 2 writings...let me know what you think

    TRAPPED

    in a world filled with fear and darkness stands a man all alone
    followed by his creeping shadow of the past he can't let go
    tries to run into the future
    tries to run to get away
    closing all the doors behind him
    but the shadow will never fade
    scratching and kicking he tears down the walls
    fear of his shadow which brings him his faults
    no time to wonder the past is all done
    the shadow keeps smiling keeps blocking the sun
    trapped in his mind the past that's past him
    haunting all his thoughts inside
    feed the shadow
    just feed the shadow and it will never leave your side
    he tries to numb the pain inside him
    he tries to block it all away
    closing all the doors behind him
    but the shadow will never fade

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    california commented on TRAPPED

    04-21-2012

    this poem is very well written, with feeling and style... I've been on here for an hour and your's is the first work I found that I enjoyed tonight..... like the use of words that ALMOST rhyme..... very nice

    Bones73

    04/21/2012

    thank you very much california

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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