Why?

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    Why?
    Why do they call us Freaks?
    Whay do they Judge us for the way we act?
    Why do they treat us like Durt?
    Wheh we have done nothing wrong to them.
    Why do they say things about us that is not true?
    Why do they laught at us for the way we dress?
    Why is it so wrong to be different from others?
    Why is it wrong to stand uo for what we belive in?
    The belife of showing the world who we truly are?
    Why can't it all stop?
    Why God?
    Why?

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    Godsgang commented on Why?

    07-17-2009

    A poem with passion and reason . yet it seems incomplete. it would have been better with why and when alternate lines, like in line 3 and 4 but overall very good.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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