21 Things I hate about you

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    21 Things I hate about you

    I hate the way you make me smile.
    I hate the way you never say good bye.
    I hate the way I fell in love with you.
    I hate the way my heart beats for you.
    I hate the way you never say I love you to.
    I hate the way you are on my mind 24/7.
    I hate the way you make me feel beautiful.
    I hate the way you smile at me.
    I hate the way you never say what you feel.
    I hate the way I feel when I am with you.
    I hate the feeling that you will never love me.
    I hate the way I feel about you.
    I hate the way I love you.
    I hate the way you act to me.
    I hate the way you tell me what to do.
    I hate the way you look at me.
    I hate the way you ride your skateboard.
    I hate that you loved someone else.
    I hate that there will never be a me and you.
    I hate the way I act around you.

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    Godsgang commented on 21 Things I hate about you

    07-17-2009

    I very much prefer poems that rhyme yet I know this is not always the way. nevertheless I think this poem has Love / Hate, passion and despair but somhow it seems out of balance like just a list. If they were in a different order it would have been great.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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