21 Things I hate about you

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    21 Things I hate about you

    I hate the way you make me smile.
    I hate the way you never say good bye.
    I hate the way I fell in love with you.
    I hate the way my heart beats for you.
    I hate the way you never say I love you to.
    I hate the way you are on my mind 24/7.
    I hate the way you make me feel beautiful.
    I hate the way you smile at me.
    I hate the way you never say what you feel.
    I hate the way I feel when I am with you.
    I hate the feeling that you will never love me.
    I hate the way I feel about you.
    I hate the way I love you.
    I hate the way you act to me.
    I hate the way you tell me what to do.
    I hate the way you look at me.
    I hate the way you ride your skateboard.
    I hate that you loved someone else.
    I hate that there will never be a me and you.
    I hate the way I act around you.

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    Godsgang commented on 21 Things I hate about you

    07-17-2009

    I very much prefer poems that rhyme yet I know this is not always the way. nevertheless I think this poem has Love / Hate, passion and despair but somhow it seems out of balance like just a list. If they were in a different order it would have been great.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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