?WHY?

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    ?WHY?

    Why was I born to a world,
    Where they tease us of Responsibility.

    Why do we have to, 
    Be 18 to do what we want but Still get in trouble.

    Why does this seem to happen,
    To me only when I'm blacked out From everyone else.

    Why do I get in trouble no, Matter what I DO!!!

    Why do I say Why, 
    It's a crooked letter,
    But it's true I say
    WHY A LOT!!!!....????   

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    SEVEN commented on ?WHY?

    12-19-2009

    Well lil lady in my opinion, to answer your Y's to the best of my knowledge is "Why was I born to a world, Where they tease us of Responsibility." to experience the wonders of His creations.. "Why do we have to, Be 18 to do what we want but Still get in trouble." to take responsiblity of your own actions...."Why does this seem to happen, To me only when I'm blacked out From everyone else." bcuz u allow the negativies to embrace u. "Why do I get in trouble no, Matter what I DO!!!" well are ya inviting troouble? "Why do I say Why?" cuz ur at that stage where the Y's is your entertained word or letter...good write youngster, I hope u clearly understood what I said...keep the pen flowing. u will get better as u continue....Kudos
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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