WhyIDon'tKnow

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    WhyIDon'tKnow

    Why I don’t know


    You ask me questions and inquire about my well being
    Always you tap at the door of my heart and
    Try to look into my eyes

    Why I don’t know

    You are so serious about me
    Left out by the world and turned down by
    What charm I hold for u

    Why , I don’t know

    That I cant accept you
    Your attentions in a positive way
    If at all I try then may be I do But I don’t even want to

    Why I don’t know

    You are the first person who took the pains to even chat to me
    While all others just tested me
    Its so surprising that you find me interesting


    I don’t know what it holds for both of us
    I don’t want to be artificial or active
    Let this time go by to improve
    I hope it improves and binds and builds

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    StandingBear commented on WhyIDon'tKnow

    06-08-2009

    Looks much better now Mary, glad my advice was accepted . The title words only need a space between each word. You're doing great! Keep up the good work! SBear

    MaryPalhan

    06/12/2009

    Thanks for ur advice

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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