WhyIDon'tKnow

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    WhyIDon'tKnow

    Why I don’t know


    You ask me questions and inquire about my well being
    Always you tap at the door of my heart and
    Try to look into my eyes

    Why I don’t know

    You are so serious about me
    Left out by the world and turned down by
    What charm I hold for u

    Why , I don’t know

    That I cant accept you
    Your attentions in a positive way
    If at all I try then may be I do But I don’t even want to

    Why I don’t know

    You are the first person who took the pains to even chat to me
    While all others just tested me
    Its so surprising that you find me interesting


    I don’t know what it holds for both of us
    I don’t want to be artificial or active
    Let this time go by to improve
    I hope it improves and binds and builds

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    StandingBear commented on WhyIDon'tKnow

    06-08-2009

    Looks much better now Mary, glad my advice was accepted . The title words only need a space between each word. You're doing great! Keep up the good work! SBear

    MaryPalhan

    06/12/2009

    Thanks for ur advice

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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