WHILST ALONE

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    Everyone i've ever met has been searching for themselves at one time or another, myself included. Some discover, many don't.

    WHILST ALONE

     Another rainy day
    Every drop that falls
    Reminds me of tears
    I've seen ladies' cry

    When i'd left
    Looking for me
    Though i'd cared
    And tried to explain

    Words were a waste of time
    Something unseen
    I had to find
    Out there
    Inside

    Searching everywhere
    My paths' direction
    The meaning of life
    I'd become weary
    From being so lost

    Running in circles
    No sense of mind
    Finding what i needed
    Gave me inner peace
    Whilst alone

    Copyright © July 2009
    StandingBear

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    stellar commented on WHILST ALONE

    07-24-2010

    SB...I don't understand the song "the scientist" but through this poem I kind of understand it now...good capture of that feeling of emptiness SB,,,^_^ v
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    StandingBear

    07/25/2010

    Thanks Stellar for your time reading on my page. I'm glad you enjoyed.

    cmlestrade commented on WHILST ALONE

    12-04-2009

    I call it wanderlust. It comes to all of us. I use to tell my partner I had wanderlust. Searching for that something that is still so elusive. Sometimes settling into peace is the answer, still sometimes I wonder, what else is out there.
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    StandingBear

    12/04/2009

    Thank you cmlestrade for your magnificent insight as always! SBear

    Azzrella commented on WHILST ALONE

    09-27-2009

    I THINK EVERY ONE OF US NEEDS TIME ALONE TO FIGURE OUT WHO WE ARE, WE ARE NO GOOD TO OTHERS IF WE BECOME FOR THEM...TO THINE OWN SELF BE TRUE.
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    StandingBear

    09/28/2009

    Thank you Azzrella! SBear

    am2anangel commented on WHILST ALONE

    09-15-2009

    Your search in this piece is very evident. Once again you stay true to your unique style. I enjoy your work. Well done.
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    StandingBear

    09/15/2009

    Thank you angel! SBear

    BraveMoon commented on WHILST ALONE

    08-26-2009

    I am never alone in my own mind... it is a curse and a blessing, but it's my particular brand of insanity, tears of ladies, what of your tears, what makes you cry
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    StandingBear

    08/26/2009

    Thank you BM! SBear

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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