Which Way?

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    Which Way?

    Take my hand, lean on me. Know my child,

    I'm always here. Stay with me now, please

    don't fade. There's someone I want you to

    see. He was a man with a heart, so great

    and so pure. He took your place, your

    shame, oh everthing you've ever done. He

    didn't have to come down to earth and die

    for all our souls. Oh breathe my darling,

    don't go now, let me hold you now, just

    breathe. Broken and abused, he died for me

    and you. Your safe in his arms, if only,

    you belive. Breathe honey, breathe. now look

    at me. Which way will you choose, tonight.

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    rossmangeles commented on Which Way?

    07-06-2009

    I like the way you continually build the interest of the reader. Nice write. Nice message. Keep it up! Cheers!

    markrohaley commented on Which Way?

    02-03-2009

    I love you Jesus Yeshua !

    JJJOGG commented on Which Way?

    12-17-2008

    awe im not very sure where you were going with this at first which is really neat cuz it like builds expense but then the end to me it seems like theres two things going on, one they are talking about jesus and/or the woman is giving birth. and again

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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