Where are you going?

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  • Passion
    • Kelseybelle
    • Waiting for spring Break... what will i do?

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    April 9th, 2009

    Where are you going?
    Please don't leave me
    Don't go away
    Don't change anything
    I'll miss all of the things we say

    You are so much more than a friend
    I know
    You tell me you love me
    How could you go?

    I won't let you leave
    Won't let you say goodbye
    Why would you just disappear?
    And let good times just pass us by

    You are with me forever now
    Only you can have the key to my heart
    And it is mine to hold forever
    Just let this be our start.

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    blakeylee commented on Where are you going?

    04-26-2009

    Hmmmmm... trying to figure out who this is directed to. good though. the questions make this personal. i like it alot
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