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    When the rain falls to the ground it symbolizes the tears in my eyes
    When it thunders it is the pain in me
    that is wanting to die.

    When the sun shines it is the freedom inside of me
    When the birds chirp that is my happiness that was set free

    When the moon comes out that is my fear
    when the wind blows that is god wiping my tear.

    When I bow my head and pray
    That is me thanking god for letting me live another day.

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    arfin09 commented on When

    03-01-2009

    nicely put, good flow. thanks!write more stuff...you have the flair.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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