when we say goodbye

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    when we say goodbye


    You are not sincere in love
    But I still cannot merciless forget you
    Just like this rain, my life will pass
    Please be honest, even for once.

    Autumn comes, love fades away
    My heart still misses you; my soul tries to forget
    Those promises, those love words…
    Already drift away with those lonely leaves
    Fall in love so quick, that’s why we can’t survive

    Dear my love, my heart bleeds when I say goodbye
    Dear my love, when you walk away
    My abandoned soul wanders back to the past
    Try to forget…….
    Tomorrow walking on that flowery road
    Dear my love, please even once remember
    Why and why did we loose that love?

    Because the sun can’t be divided
    And the moon turns solitary forever.

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    ontherise1984 commented on when we say goodbye

    11-14-2011

    "Because the sun can’t be divided And the moon turns solitary forever." I like poetic imagery such as this; it is an amazing conclusion for a well-written poem.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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