What it would feel like

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    What it would feel like

    i was thinking.. what it would feel like


    what it would feel like

    to fall asleep in your arms

    to feel safe at night

    safe enough to turn off the light

    to trust you completely

    to take it slow

    just let go

    hold nothing back

    to have a man be patient

    while i adjust

    from feeling his love

    and not just his lust

    to have a man who won't

    try to tame me

    but embrace the woman i am

    A.Lewis
     10/21/08

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    shakeme4life commented on What it would feel like

    09-22-2010

    YES, YES , YES , speak on it ... (releasing a sigh) i wanted to exhale so bad after i read this .... right on point

    FitzHouston09 commented on What it would feel like

    04-13-2010

    Nice images brought up in this poem which indeed need to be satisfied to make a relationship strong. Thanks for sharing your heart.

    optimistic commented on What it would feel like

    07-18-2009

    I thought this poem had a great start I really wanted to hear more of your passion for writing great beggining I love the line to have a man be patient while I adjust from feeling his love.

    ChinaLewis

    07/18/2009

    ok..ok..in feel when u rush things u miss out on lot of great things..(smiles)..thanks 4 reading

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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