What i feel abut you
You touch me I quiver, the nervousness is taking over, my heart is going into shock just from a sweet and loving touch from you, just by a sweet amazing kiss my heart comes back, the warmth of your hugs warm me up like a cozy fire on a beautiful night couldn't ask for more, the love, kiss, and hugs are so passionate its what keeps my heart beating every beat and keeps my lungs working just for such an amazing personWhat i feel abut you
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Tags: Love
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bluewolf commented on What i feel abut you
12-06-2010
- Love, illusive as it may be, is a wondrous and beautiful gift to a heart that is longing.
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sammia commented on What i feel abut you
09-06-2010
- I truly like this one...The flow is good, maybe try and write it in a different form and not in paragraph form(just a thought)...Overall great write. Easy to read and understand...
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09/06/2010
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Artie commented on What i feel abut you
09-06-2010
- Very nice piece. You convey you feelings well - 10 from me
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SEVEN commented on What i feel abut you
09-05-2010
- For a min there I thought you were tawkin bout God...I guess i was wrong-o...hehe...But its still a nice write about someone that made you feel this way...I hope he/she appreciate it....Kudos
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winterkou commented on What i feel abut you
09-05-2010
- Nice write about the emotions you feel when in love.
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