Losing you
What am i suppose to do I'm slowly losing you and there's nothing i can do my breath is slowly getting shortier my heart is slowly stopping and all i can do is sit there and watch i feels like i can't move like someone is holding me back so i can't tun to you so i can't see why things are going the way they are please come back to me.Losing you
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Tags: Sadness
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angelchaser commented on Losing you
08-16-2010
- I can feel and relate to the pain of which you speak. Nicely done.
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Mangus commented on Losing you
08-04-2010
- a good depiction of the pain experienced in loss ...well done
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