an amazing night

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    an amazing night

     Laying under the sky looking at the stars in your arms so memorized i don't even realize the people around us loving every moment hearing love songs just like a fairy tale never wanting this fairy tale to end.

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    winterkou commented on an amazing night

    09-05-2010

    wasnt really amazed at this poem. It supposed to be an amazing night , an unforgettable one I assume. read my write A Fairy Tale Love .
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    lonewolf commented on an amazing night

    09-02-2010

    another nice one, but again you could have expanded it. what constellations were out. how bright was the moon, or where was the big dipper. how special was this guy... how did he make you feel at that moment
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