Were Do We Belong

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    Were Do We Belong

    take my hand and i'll take you there to a special place
    where you cant breathe the air i suffercate
    im not alone yet im a lone all the time
    you close your eyes and try to be strong
    you opened your eyes and then i was gone
    trembling in your arms tears drop from my eyes
    holding tight for a moment trying not to walk away
    so many memories with so little time
    two different people trying to live one life
    two worlds apart so where do we belong

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    Tempestlady commented on Were Do We Belong

    06-21-2009

    Is it about death? or love? or both? It seems to be about finding a middle ground between two worlds. I liked it. But lost some rhyme in the midde. Loved the displacement, never fitting in, no place to belong theme.

    ccslim commented on Were Do We Belong

    05-18-2009

    Super start! Content really good! Spelling of course is the major flaw.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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